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제목 Some people like Deborah9 is hopeless
작성자 BenHuh

Some people like Debora9 is hopelessly inadequate in writing her opinion, regardless her basic grammar, in English.

In composition of either an essay or an article there are a few basic requirements to be met in order for her to convey messages properly so that the reader could understand the main point in its expression.

The general rules are 3 C's, Clear, Compact and Complete.

To have the statement clear, the writer is required to take steps in a sequence of introduction, expansion, elaboration and conclusion, including the right vocabulary in its use, of course.

Secondly Compact means that the whole expounding should not be repeated again and again what was already mentioned earlier.

In another word, the shorter the better, in contrary to the spoken form, with the exception of Abe Lincoln's Gettysburg Address which is short and compacted as an example.

Finally it should be directed toward to the conclusion without missing what was originally intended to accomplish. If someone did not observe those golden rules in writing, it could possibly end up as a garbage with lots of gibberish, which refers to speech or other use of language that is nonsense, or that appears to be nonsense."

Ben Huh

2015-11-07 13:15:14
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10   deborah9 [ 2015-11-09 03:41:21 ] 

I went college, [after my two children in school full time until 3 pm] in US and complete 4 years course to get my RN state of CA[ one of the highest respected] Lic. and make 6 figure income. Inflammation of your frontal lobe cause you cannot understand what I said, Ben hur.

9   saywhaaat [ 2015-11-07 21:14:08 ] 

Some people like Deborah9 is hopeless
Some people like Deborah9 is hopeless
Some people like Deborah9 is hopeless

영어 차암 쉽네 ㅋㅋㅋ

8   sanghai [ 2015-11-07 16:00:45 ] 

#6 이 #7...모두 지잘난 맛에 사는 거라

7   alexander [ 2015-11-07 14:21:16 ] 

영어든 한국어든간에 제대로 글쓴다는게 쉬운일이 아니다.
글쓰는것도 연습과 노력이 있어야만 발전을 하는데, 아무렇게나 싸질러
놓은 글, 그것은 글이 아니라 쓰레기일 뿐인것이다.

한국어는 아무렇게나 써도되고, 영어는 철자법과 문법에 하자가 있으면
안된다는 식의 사고방식도 문제가 있다.

영어 글이나 한국어 글이나 글은 똑같은 글일뿐인것인데, 잘쓴글은
그만큼 노력이 있었다는 증거이고, 못쓴글은 그냥 똥싸듯이 싸질러 놓은
것인데 여기서 글쓴이의 인격이 보이는것이다.

본글이나 댓글이나 똑같이 해당이 된다.

6   deborah9 [ 2015-11-07 14:20:10 ] 

won pak1, sanghai, zen, Ben Hur....HM...

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